How to Write Website Content That Brings in Enquiries

Most small business websites are written the way the owner would describe the business to themselves. Lots of “we”, a list of services, a line about passion for quality. Visitors arrive with one question, which is whether you can solve their problem, and leave without an answer. If you want to write website content that brings in enquiries, start from the visitor, not from the business.
This guide is for owners who write their own pages, or who brief someone else to do it.
Start with the question the visitor typed into Google
Every page should answer one search. A plumber in Leith does not need a page called “Our Services”. They need a page that answers “boiler repair Leith” and says what happens when you call.
Before you write a word, finish this sentence: “Someone searching for ______ should read this page and decide to ______.” If you cannot fill both gaps, the page is trying to do too much. Split it.
One page, one job, one next step. That also helps search engines understand what the page is about.
Say what you do in the first two lines
Visitors decide quickly whether a page is for them. Put the service, the place and the type of customer at the top, in plain words.
- Weak: “Welcome to our website. We are a dedicated team committed to excellence.”
- Stronger: “We repair and service boilers for homes in Edinburgh and the Lothians. Most call-outs are same day.”
The second version tells a visitor they are in the right place and gives them a reason to keep reading.
Write about their problem before your solution
People respond to descriptions of their own situation. Spend a short section on what the customer is dealing with: the leak, the tax deadline, the wedding in June. Then explain how you deal with it.
Use the words your customers use. If they say “tidy up my garden”, do not write “landscape maintenance solutions”. The phone calls and emails you already get are the best source of wording you have. Keep a note of the phrases that come up.
Show proof, not adjectives
“Experienced” and “reliable” are claims. A visitor trusts evidence:
- A real customer review with a first name and area
- A photo of actual work, not stock imagery
- How long you have been trading and what qualifications you hold
- A specific example: what the job was, what you did, how long it took
Only use proof that is true and that you can back up. One genuine review beats a paragraph of self-praise.
Make the next step obvious
Every page needs a clear action. Tell visitors what to do and what happens afterwards: “Call us on the number below, or send a message and we will reply the same working day.”
Put the action at the end of the page and again near the top for longer pages. Use one action per page. A visitor offered a phone number, a form, a newsletter and three social links usually does none of them.
Keep it easy to read
- Short paragraphs of two to four sentences
- Headings that tell people what each section covers
- Plain words over long ones
- Read it aloud. If you stumble, rewrite the sentence
Most people read on a phone, so check the page there before you publish.
Keep it current
A page that was right a few years ago can quietly cost you enquiries. Prices, opening hours, team photos and service lists drift out of date. Set a reminder to review your main pages every few months, and improve one page at a time rather than rewriting everything at once.
This is also where steady effort pays off. One new or improved page each month adds up over a year, and search results tend to reward that consistency. It takes time, and anyone promising overnight results is not being straight with you.
Where Nimble Digital fits
Writing good pages takes time many owners do not have. In our Get Found plan, one new or improved page on your website is included every month, alongside your Google Business Profile, reviews and hosting. Grow Your Share adds two new pages a month for the services and places you want to be found for, based on research into what your customers search for.
If you would rather have someone handle it, get in touch and we will look at your current pages and tell you what we would change first. You can also read about how we build and run websites.
Frequently asked questions
How long should a website page be?
As long as it needs to be to answer the visitor’s question. Many service pages work well at 400 to 700 words. Add detail where customers ask questions, and cut anything that does not help them decide.
How often should I update my website content?
Review your main pages every few months and fix anything out of date. Adding or improving one page a month is a realistic pace for most small businesses.
Should I use keywords on every page?
Use the words your customers search for, in the title, a heading and naturally in the text. Write for the person first. Repeating a phrase unnaturally makes the page harder to read.
Can I write my own website content?
Yes, and many owners do it well because they know the customers. Use your own wording, add real proof, and ask someone outside the business to read it and say what is unclear.
What is the most important page to get right?
Usually your main service pages and your home page. They are where visitors decide whether to contact you, so they deserve the most care.
Gordon Sheppard